Добавил:
Upload Опубликованный материал нарушает ваши авторские права? Сообщите нам.
Вуз: Предмет: Файл:
Technical writing.doc
Скачиваний:
7
Добавлен:
13.08.2019
Размер:
1.59 Mб
Скачать

7.6 Thank you letter

EXERCISE

212232 Moscow

Lubimovskaya Str. 21, 115

13 August, 20.......

Mr. Philip Wolgin

Director, Editorial Services

Atlantic Publishing

123320, Moscow

Woroninskij Pr-d, 67

Dear Mr. Wolgin,

(1) I want to thank you very much for interviewing me yesterday for the associate editor (2) position. I enjoyed you and (3) learning more about your publications.

(4) My enthusiasm for the position and my interest in working for Atlantic Publishing (5) were strengthened as a result of the interview. I think my education and (6) internship fit nicely with the (7) the job requirements. I am sure that I could (8) make a significant contribution to the firm over time.

(9) I want to reiterate my strong interest in the position and I working with you and your staff. You provide (10) the kind of opportunity I seek. Please, (11) feel free to contact me at (095) 333-33-33 or profy@aol.ru if I can provide you with (12) any additional information.

Again, (13) thank you for the interview and your consideration.

(14) Sincerely,

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

Appendix I Proposal Presentation Criteria for Evaluation

Speaker _______________________________________________

Topic _________________________________________________

Introduction

States name and title clearly and confidently (not rushed)

Statement of the problem

Audience’s attention captured and maintained

Audience’s needs, interest, and/or knowledge anticipated and addressed in some way

Logical, credible pattern of development

Speech sounds like an attempt to convince the audience that the work is needed or valuable in some way

Speaker sounds like an objective researcher seeking answers

Adequate transitions (связующее звено)between ideas

Appropriate (соответствующий) claims are made and supported by effective references

Objectives

Specific and clear objectives

Limitations are discussed in a specific and relevant way

Plan sounds open-minded

Language

Appropriate level of technical language

Grammatically correct

Well-chosen words

Technical terms defined

Pronounced correctly

Visuals

Smoothly integrated into talk

Attractive/ Quite clear

Relevant (существенный; важный)

Delivery

Ethos (преобладающая черта)– confident, credible (надежный)

Delivery added interest to the presentation

Delivery detracted ( умалять, приуменьшать) from the presentation

Voice

Adequate volume

Good enunciation ( хорошее произношение, дикция)

Good expression

Well-paced

Avoids distracting use of fillers(дополнительные слова)

Avoids serious stumbles (запинка)

Physical presence

Appears prepared and confident

Faces audience

Makes eye contact with whole audience, not camera

Gestures appropriately, naturally

Avoids too many distracting movements or nervous tics

Time Appropriate?

Соседние файлы в предмете [НЕСОРТИРОВАННОЕ]