- •Foreword
- •Contents
- •Contributor Current and Past Positions: Association for Academic Surgery
- •Contributors
- •Academic Surgeons as Bridge-Tenders
- •Types of Surgical Research
- •Going Forward
- •Selected Readings
- •Introduction
- •Preparation Phase
- •Assistant Professor
- •Job Search
- •The First Three Years
- •Career Development Awards (CDAs)
- •Contemplating a Mid-Career Move?
- •Approaching Promotion
- •Associate Professor and Transition to Full Professor
- •Conclusion
- •Selected Readings
- •Introduction
- •Reviewing the Literature
- •Developing a Hypothesis
- •Study Design
- •Selected Readings
- •Introduction
- •The Dual Loyalties of the Surgeon-Scientist
- •Human Subjects Research
- •Informed Consent
- •Surgical Innovation and Surgical Research
- •Conflict of Interest
- •Publication and Authorship
- •Conclusion
- •References
- •Sources of Error in Medical Research
- •Study Design
- •Inferential Statistics
- •Types of Variables
- •Measures of Central Tendency and Spread
- •Measures of Spread
- •Comparison of Numeric Variables
- •Comparison of Categorical Values
- •Outcomes/Health Services Research
- •Steps in Outcomes Research
- •The Basics of Advanced Statistical Analysis
- •Multivariate Analysis
- •Time-to-Event Analysis
- •Advanced Methods for Controlling for Selection Bias
- •Propensity Score Analysis
- •Instrumental Variable (IV) Analysis
- •Summary
- •Selected Readings
- •Transgenic Models
- •Xenograft Models
- •Noncancer Models
- •Alternative Vertebrate Models
- •Selected Readings
- •Overview
- •Intellectual Disciplines and Research Tools
- •Comparative Effectiveness Research
- •Patient-Centered Outcomes Research
- •Data Synthesis
- •Overview
- •Intellectual Disciplines and Research Tools
- •Disparities
- •Quality Measurement
- •Implementation Science
- •Patient Safety
- •Optimizing the Health Care Delivery System
- •Overview
- •Intellectual Disciplines and Research Tools
- •Policy Evaluation
- •Surgical Workforce
- •Conclusion
- •References
- •Introduction
- •What Is Evidence-Based Medicine?
- •Evidence-Based Educational Research
- •Forums for Surgical Education Research
- •Conducting Surgical Education Research
- •Developing Good Research Questions
- •Beginning the Study Design Process
- •Developing a Research Team
- •Pilot Testing
- •Demonstrating Reliability and Validity
- •Developing a Study Design
- •Data Collection and Analysis
- •Surveys
- •Ethics
- •Funding
- •Conclusions
- •Selected Readings
- •Genomics
- •Gene-Expression Profiling
- •Proteomics
- •Metabolomics
- •Conclusions
- •References
- •Selected Readings
- •Introduction
- •Why Write
- •Getting Started
- •Where and When to Write
- •Choosing the Journal
- •Instructions to Authors
- •Writing
- •Manuscript Writing Order
- •Figures and Tables
- •Methods
- •Results
- •Figure Legends
- •Introduction
- •Discussion
- •Acknowledgments
- •Abstract
- •Title
- •Authorship
- •Revising Before Submission
- •Responding to Reviewer Comments
- •References
- •Selected Readings
- •Introduction
- •Origins of the Term
- •Modern Definition and Primer
- •Transition from Mentee to Colleague
- •Mentoring Risks
- •Conclusion
- •References
- •Selected Readings
- •The Career Development Plan
- •Choosing the Mentor
- •Writing the Career Development Plan
- •The Candidate
- •Research Plan
- •Final Finishing Points About the Research Plan
- •Summary
- •References
- •Introduction
- •Decisions, Decisions!
- •Mission Impossible: Defining a Laboratory Mission or Vision
- •Project Planning
- •Saving Money
- •Seek Help
- •People
- •Who Should I Hire?
- •Advertising
- •References
- •Interviews
- •Conduct a Structured Interview
- •Probation Period
- •Trainees
- •Trainee Funding
- •Time Is on Your Mind
- •Research Techniques
- •Program Leadership
- •Summary
- •Selected Readings
- •Introduction
- •Direct Evidence
- •Indirect Evidence
- •Burnout
- •Prevention of and Recovery from Work–Life Imbalance
- •Action Plan for Finding Balance: Personal Level
- •Action Plan for Finding Balance: Professional Level
- •Conclusion
- •References
- •Introduction
- •Time Management Strategies
- •Planning and Prioritizing
- •Delegating and Saying “No”
- •Action Plans
- •Activity Logs
- •Scheduling Protected Time
- •Eliminating Distractions
- •Buffer Time
- •Goal Setting
- •Completing Large Tasks
- •Maximizing Efficiency
- •Get Organized
- •Multitasking
- •Think Positive
- •Summary
- •References
- •Selected Readings
- •Index
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revising a manuscript, as well as use of good English language grammar and effective writing strategies. Finally, and importantly, the topic of how to respond to reviewer comments and revise a manuscript according to these comments will be discussed. It is often this last step that will dictate if a manuscript is accepted or rejected for publication. Authors all too frequently overlook, gloss over, or rush through this aspect of paper writing, to their detriment. In summary, this chapter is designed to provide a framework for authors to write, submit, and revise a manuscript for peer-review publication while at the same time deconstructing manuscript writing so that it can be an enjoyable, nondaunting task.
Why Write
There are many reasons why it is important to write and write well in academic medicine. First, publication deficiency is the single greatest barrier to promotion and tenure. Publication of research, whether it is basic science/translational research, clinical outcomes/health services research, or education research, is the primary measure of academic productivity. Second, writing is a way to convey novel concepts and ideas to the academic community at large and contribute to the collective knowledge. Third, publication provides both personal and institutional recognition. Fourth, failure to publish results in many faculty members leaving academia. Thus, if you are interested in achieving and maintaining an academic position, and/or interested in conveying novel concepts and ideas to a larger audience, you must become proficient at writing.
Getting Started
Where and When to Write
For most individuals, finding time to write is difficult in today’s busy electronic age with increasing pressures for clinical productivity. However, to be successful, you must make
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writing a priority. While some believe that the first three rules of academic writing are (1) just do it, (2) just do it, and (3) just do it, this is more easily said than done. It is important to recognize your writing style. Some prefer to write in long, quiet blocks of time. Others prefer short, repeated sessions. After recognizing your writing style, it is important to block out the necessary time on your calendar to write. For productive writing time, it is recommended to have an environment free from distractions such as emails and phone calls. If you are one of those individuals who needs constant email contact to feel in touch, then try at least muting the volume on your computer so you are not disturbed every time you receive an email. But best practice would be to close the email application all together. Last, setting writing deadlines and adhering to them is important for maintaining consistent productivity. Cheating on your self-imposed deadlines only hurts you and your academic prowess, as it often leads to rushing, cutting of corners, and potentially sloppy work.
The place you write is equally important. If you have a busy personal life or have children, writing at home can be very difficult. However, if you have an open door policy at work, writing in your office can also be difficult as you may encounter many interruptions from people stopping by to ask questions and chat. Depending on your circumstances, you should decide where the best place is for you to write. Some may prefer finding a quiet hidden spot in the library with their laptop, while others may decide that a corner booth in a coffee shop is ideal. Merely closing your office door may be a sufficient signal to others that private time is needed and that you should not be disturbed. Regardless, find what works best for you and adhere to it. Having discipline is half the battle.
Choosing the Journal
Before you begin to write, it is critical to determine who your audience is so that an appropriate journal can be chosen.
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audience. Second, establish if it is related to basic science research, clinical outcomes or health services research, or education research? Third, determine the length of your publication. Addressing these three questions will help to distill the number of suitable journals to a manageable number. Once you have narrowed the list of potential journals, you should become familiar with the impact factor of those journals to further refine which one to select. The impact factor is a number that is generated annually from an equation that reflects the average number of times publications from that journal are subsequently cited in other articles. A higher number can be translated to mean that publication of manuscripts in that journal is more likely to have an impact on the scientific community, and is thus an indicator of the relative importance of that journal within its field. Frequently, promotion and tenure committees, society membership committees, award committees, etc., will evaluate not only the number of publications on faculty curriculum vitae, but also the impact factor of the journals. Therefore, it is important to publish your manuscript in the highest impact factor journal that is relevant and suitable for your publication. Last, it is important to look at the actual articles published in the journal being considered to confirm that the journal publishes articles similar to yours. Browse the table of contents. If there is any doubt, choose another journal.
Instructions to Authors
After allocating time to write, deciding the best location to write, and determining the most appropriate journal for submission,it is imperative to obtain the “Instructions toAuthors.” This should be done BEFORE any writing is commenced.The “Instructions to Authors” will outline the specific requirements for that journal, and these can be quite variable. Instructions will detail the total character, word, or page length for the manuscript; total number of figures and tables allowed; and total character or word count for the abstract.