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8.10 Minimize punctuation in bullets

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INCORRECT GRAMMAR

 

 

(DIFFERENT GRAMMATICAL

INCORRECT GRAMMAR

GOOD EXAMPLE

FORMS)

(ALL NOUNS)

(ALL VERBS)

A Java infrastructure for

A Java infrastructure for

A Java infrastructure for

MPEG-7 features

MPEG-7 features

Processing MPEG-7

processing

processing

features

XML database managing

XML database management

Managing XML

Algorithms ontology

Algorithms ontology

database

exploiting

exploitation

Exploiting algorithms

Functions integrating

Functions integration

ontology

 

 

Integrating functions

 

 

 

In the first column above, the final word in each bullet ends in -ing, but unfortunately they are not all the same grammatical form. Processing can be a verb or a noun, but the other three (managing, exploiting, integrating) can only be verbs and cannot be in this position in a phrase. In the second column, there is a series of noun+noun+noun constructions, which is difficult for the audience to understand quickly and is generally not grammatically correct. The best solution is to use verbs, as in the third column.

8.10 Minimize punctuation in bullets

There is no general agreement on how to punctuate bullets. The simplest solution is to use no punctuation at all, and begin each bullet either with a lower case letter or with an upper case letter. The important thing is to use the same style consistently.