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Problem 17 Parallel structures - in a series

Ideas of equal importance should be expressed by the same grammatical structure.

Examples:

Incorrect:

Jane is young, enthusiastic, and she has talent.

Correct:

Jane is young, enthusiastic, and talented.

Exercises:

Part A: Choose the correct answer.

In a hot, sunny climate, man acclimatizes by eating less, drinking more liquids, wearing lighter clothing, and _____.

(A) skin changes that darken  (B) his skin may darken  (C) experiencing a darkening of the skin  (D) darkens his skin 

Part B: Choose the incorrect word or phrase and correct it.

The aims of the Common Market are  to eliminate tariffs between member countries; developing  common policies for agriculture, labor, welfare, trade, and transportation;  and to abolish   trusts and cartels.

Problem 18 Parallel structure - after correlative conjunctions

Ideas of equal importance are introduced by correlative conjunctions:

both...and either...or neither...nor whether...or not only … but also

Examples:

Incorrect:

She is not only famous in the United States, but also abroad.

Correct:

She is famous not only in the United States, but also abroad.

Exercises:

Part A: Choose the correct answer.

Both historically and _____ Ontario is the heartland of Canada.

(A) in its geography  (B) geographically  (C) also its geography  (D) geography 

Part B: Choose the incorrect word or phrase and correct it.

The cacao bean was cultivated  by the Aztecs  not only to drink but also  currency  .

Problem 19 Redundancy - unnecessary phrases

Avoid using a noun and and the pronoun that refers to it consecutively in a sentence. Avoid using a pronoun after the noun it refers to, and that. Avoid using an adjective with such phrases as:

in character in nature

S

+

V

+

C

+

M

Examples:

Incorrect:

The key officials who testified before the Senate committee responded in a manner that was evasive.

Correct:

The key officials who testified before the Senate committee responded evasively.

Exercises:

Part A: Choose the correct answer.

Waitresses and waiters who serve ___________ deserve at least a 20 percent tip.

(A) in a courteous manner  (B) courteously  (C) with courtesy in their manner  (D) courteous 

Part B: Choose the incorrect word or phrase and correct it.

Hummingbirds move their  wings so rapid a way  that they appear to be hanging  in the air  .

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