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Highlighting significant data in a table/chart

It is apparent from this table that very few ...... This table is quite revealing in several ways. First, unlike the other tables ...... Data from this table can be compared with the data in Table 4.6 which shows ...... From the data in Figure 9, it is apparent that the length of time left between ...... From this data we can see that Study 2 resulted in the lowest value of ...... The histogram in Fig 1. indicates that ...... What is interesting in this data is that ...... In Fig.10 there is a clear trend of decreasing ...... As Table III shows, there is a significant difference (t = -2.15, p = 0.03) between the two groups.

Statements of result (positive)

Strong evidence of X was found when ...... This result is significant at the p = 0.05 level. There was a significant positive correlation between ...... There was a signifcant difference between the two conditions ...... On average, Xs were shown to have ...... The mean score for X was ...... Interestingly, for those subjects with X, ...... A positive correlation was found between X and Y.

Further analysis showed that ...... Further statistical tests revealed .....

Statements of result (negative)

There was no increase of X associated with ..... There were no significant differences between ...... No significant differences were found between ..... No increase in X was detected. No difference greater than X was observed. The Chi-square test did not show any significant differences between ...... None of these differences were statistically significant. Overall, X did not affect males and females differently in these measure

Highlighting significant, interesting or surprising results

The most striking result to emerge from the data is that ...... Interestingly, this correlation is related to ..... The correlation between X and Y is interesting because ...... The more surprising correlation is with the ...... The single most striking observation to emerge from the data comparison was ......

Reporting results from questionnaires and interviews

The response rate was 60% at six months and 56% at 12 months. Of the study population, 90 subjects completed and returned the questionnaire. Of the initial cohort of 123 students, 66 were female and 57 male.

The majority of respondents/those who responded felt that ..... Over half of those surveyed reported that ...... 70% of those who were interviewed indicated that ...... Almost two-thirds of the participants (64%) said that ......

Approximately half of those surveyed did not comment on ...... A small number of those interviewed suggested that ...... Only a small number of respondents indicated that ...... Of the 148 patients who completed the questionnaire, just over half indicated that ....... A minority of participants (17%) indicated ......

In response to Question 1, most of those surveyed indicated that ...... The overall response to this question was very positive. When the subject were asked ......, the majority commented that ..... Other responses to this question included ...... The overall response to this question was poor.

Transition statements

Turning now to the experimental evidence on ...... Comparing the two results, it can be seen that ...... A comparison of the two results reveals ...... If we now turn to ......

 

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