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1.5 Points to remember

1. The word job should not be used either in advertisements or applications. The terms vacancy, post, position, or opening are more appropriate.

2. If requesting an application form, keep the letter brief, but provide essential details about yourself. When returning the form, you should include a covering letter, expanding on details that might not be clear, or pointing out areas of your responsibility or your achievements. But keep this as brief as possible, as most application forms or your own c.v. should have a section where this information can appear.

3. When writing to a prospective employer, remember to explain why you left your previous post, but do not complain about the salary or conditions. Concentrate rather on the positive aspects of the post you are applying for, such as the greater potential for promotion, or your particular suitability for the type of work offered. Explain what you can offer your new employer in terms of experience or expertise, and why you particularly want the post.

Writing Curriculum Vitae (Resume). Covering letter

1.1 The curriculum vitae.Fiona Scott is one of the applicants for the job at Patagonia. Study her CV carefully to see how the information is presented and decide where each of the following headings should be placed.

REFERENCES INTERESTS PERSONAL DETAILS PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE EDUCATION ADDITIONAL SKILLS

CURRICULUM VITAE

1._________________________________

Name: Fiona Scott Date of Birth: 7 August 1969 Nationality: British Address: 58 Hanover Street Edinburgh BHg 8LM Scotland Telephone: 051449 0237

2._________________________________

1991-1998: London Chamber of Commerce and Industry Diploma in Public Relations

1988-1991: University of London BA (Honours) In Journalism and Media Studies (Class H)

1981-1988: Fettes College, Edinburgh A-levels in German (A), English (B), History (B) and Geography (C)

3._________________________________

1992 to present: Scottish Wildlife Trust Department of Public Relations Responsible for writing articles on all aspects of the Trust's activities and ensuring their distribution to the press. Editor of the Trust's monthly journal. In charge of relations with European environmental agencies.

Summers of 1990 and 1991: Three-month training period with the Glasgow Herald. Assistant to the sports editor.

Summer of 1989: Sales assistant in the record department of Harris Stores Ltd., Edinburgh.

4.­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­_________________________________

Sports: Cross-country skiing, rock-climbing and swimming. Secretary of the local branch of 'Action', an association organising summer camps for disabled children.

5._________________________________

Camp counselling certificate Grade 5 ski instructor Driver's licence (car and motorcycle) IBM PC user Fluent German and good working knowledge of French

6._________________________________

Geoffrey Williams, Bill Denholm,

Professor of Journalism, Sports Editor,

University of London Glasgow Herald

1.2 In the box are headings from a typical cv. Look at the extracts from the cv of Tomoko Horiguchi, a Japanese woman working in England. Under which of the cv headings should each extract be placed?

Personal details Education Qualifications Referees Work experience Special skills Interests and achievements

1. Fluent in Japanese and English __________________________________

2. Born 14 October, 1970 ________________________________________

3. Married, no children __________________________________________

4. MBA degree from London Business School, 2001 ___________________

5. Full range of computer skills ____________________________________

6. Aerobics, basketball, films and theatre ____________________________

7. Organised a music concert while at university _______________________

8. 1986-1989: Sapporo High School, Japan ___________________________

9. 1990-1992: Sogo Design College - studied graphic design _____________

10. Aug-Sept 1991: Work placement at IMP (graphic design firm) Seattle, USA. _________________________________________________________

11. 1993-1996: ICB (construction company) Assistant in Design Department. ______________________________________________________________

12. 64 Rose Park Crescent, London SW21 8CT _______________________

13. Clean driving licence _________________________________________

14. Certificate of Proficiency in English (1995) _______________________

15. Diploma in Computing (1996) __________________________________

16. Mr F. Luneau, Marketing Consultant, IMP, 120 Davis Avenue, Seattle, USA _________________________________________________________